Stealing kisses
Stealing secrets
Secrets forbidden
Secrets beckon
Beckon for help
Beckon surrender
Surrender my sanity
Surrender my control
Control undresses
Control possesses
Possesses my lips
Possesses my dignity
Dignity held high
Dignity soon lost
Lost in his eyes
Lost in his lust
Lust or love
Lust and thrust
Thrust his tongue
Thrust in my grip
Grip my hips
Grip with might
Might as well
Might never happen
Happen by chance
Happen one night
Night never ends
Night follows day
Day in Day out
Day dream
Dream weaver
Dream come true
True blue friend
True love
Love at first sight
Love is blind
Blind leading the blind
Blind spot
Spot of light
Spot of honey
Honey mouthed
Honey fuck
Fuck me up
Fuck me hard
Hard day’s work
Hard to deny
Deny the desire
Deny the hunger
Hunger …
Desire …
©04/2019
**Written as a Blitz Poem
I think I like this one even more! I will be reading many more even if I don’t leave a comment on them all.
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Thank you! Enjoy your visit … even if I don’t know you’re here. 🙂
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I like it how there it feels like one thing just leads to another… almost like a very seductive word association.
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Thank you! This is exactly what I was attempting to achieve. The Blitz poem is supposed to move the reader rapidly throughout a theme but because of its form, it is difficult to maintain the focus. I’m glad you were able to follow my “desire”. 🙂
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I just read the link attached to your post. I was not familiar with this form, and I would say you have nailed it in this poem. The result is beautiful as well as erotic. I think I’d like to try out this form sometime!
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I encourage you to try it — it is fun and challenging! My advice — know what you want that final word to be. I look forward to reading it!!
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Your poem flows so beautifully – I know that it takes talent to pull it off like this though and would not have been easy! Hopefully sometime I’ll manage to write one!
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Thank you … but I know you will do great.
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You did a fantastic job with this one, it flows perfectly and kept me captivated throughout. You definitely have the Blitz form perfected, that’s for sure.
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Thank you. If it wasn’t for the gift of the first line, I would never have been able to accomplish it! 🙂
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Well, it was just a first line…the rest is all you.
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